Great poem it's very good!
Keep it up:)
xoxo

i gave it a five! keep it up!!

okay i have to be honest... i didnt really like it, because you started off like you were strong "i wotn cry over you" and "it was all lies" .. then u went into how muchhe hurt you and stuff.. this poem is very mixed up and the beginning sounds immature

dont take this as me being a complete jerk im giving honest critsism

keep at writing always, you deffinetly have potential