Comments : Deaths ridge

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    babe we care coz u rok and ur always there for us. well always be here.
    gd poem babe.
    xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    really like the lines;
    will my guardian angel appear
    to announce I'm in safe hand
    that not a soul can harm me now
    as she flies me from this land

    and awww thanks for ur comments too!!i really enjoy ur poems n am grateful for ur insight!i can relate to ur poems too but am over my ex nar!yey hope ur ok too, luv LoU xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    hey, that is an awesome awesome awesome poem!! it gives good detail...and it ends really good...keep it up chicky!