Excellent poem dahling. Keep writing! You've got some real talent. *adds to favourites*
PS: Feel free to check out some of my poems and comment if you please

wow, that was amazing, i really liked that

WOAH..wow..this was pure talent!! great writing girl!!! I'm still trying to make sense of it, but that is what I like about it soooo much...its soo neat and interesting!!! Makes me curious and I want to read the poem over and over!
Brilliant..just brilliant!!!
you rock!
luv liz

i love all of your poems

Somehow, you never seize to amaze me. I am truly impressed by your talent. Keep on writing, and take care.

You descript him with such an admirable finesse. Magnificent.

I love poems where people question their sanity. It's to bad, that your not, not yet anyway.

way to write keep it up girl it will get u some where good good job.....

That is so crazy and so good...damn...