Great poem, Flowed well, 5/5, keep writing, take care
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thats really good. short but sweet if ya no wat i mean. i really liked it i duna why but i especially liked:
to a land filled with hopes and tender cares

-x-x-
a land in which pains are halved when shared
a land where all troubles are easily solved
where you feel welcome, happy to be involved

Woa this poem is really good, infact all of yours are really good!! You're so talented at writing, probably more talented than u realise! i may be 2 years older than u but i can relate to ALL of your poems!! I'm here for u if you ever need me

Luv Toni xx