awesome, absolutely amazing. Although I agree with Kenneth, you worry me sometimes. Anyway, take care and keep on writing.

dishing out the 5 stars.. another gripping peice, you made me feel uneasy, i really like how strong the ideas and imagery are in all of your work. keep it up, its really good

Great Poem! I Love it! That's exactly what I go through every night! Great way to write it out! Keep it up!

Love, Taylor

sweety there are other ways you know......

ah im not worried and inded it is a very nice poem plz keep it up, live is meant to live to live it

Not a shock, another amazing poem...
the issues this one talks about i wish go away and you can pull through this all, just look at it this way.. you have ppl who care and worry about you, other wise you wouldnt have any messages here. So please keep a smile and stay safe .....
[ i care, love, and worry about you, the whole package ] =)
-Allen

Oh well you've had a bad life, at least they didn't and inform me if i'm wrong they didn't hitt you.

Just so you know, someone named joe, stole this poem from you, he reposted it as "The Last One", he has also stolen poetry from Myself, Unseen Exposure, Michaela, and I'm sure their are more.

great imagry given...great job

that was really good. i like the way you expressed it cant wait to read more.....

heyyyy there...ugh this poem is sooo good...but it is a bit scary....makes me nervous...lol...but keep writting....muah....

kim chi alwayz *_*

I like that poem!! very nice.....I couldn't put it better myself.

Jennifer:)

Awesome poem but it seems that your life is filled with stress and very complicated. I'm sorry. Take care.
-Conner

GREAT POEM!

this is a great poem! very well written and just great. keep up the good work! take care and stay strong.