very good, i used to b able to relate but things change and so do people so i guess you will live learn and die, i'm ready for all 3

Good poem, but I was more interested in the shifting rhyme scheme. Stanza 4 seems to deviate from the ABCB, but I'm not sure if that was purposeful or not. What's the verdict on that one?

Purposeful, I didnt have a set scheme throughout the poem.