yea i can relate too, you have great talent!! made me think about my own life and i like poems that make me think. thank you for writing it.

thats good, but do cuss words really make a difference? i mean does the F word really make that much of a difference? Seriously i think you could use a better word to represent, no to criticize or anything i just think poetry doesn't need cuss words my personal oppinion. of course

yes, i liked your poem, it really expresses your feelings at that partictular time. keep it up, please read my new poem "eric" and my older one "she was perfect"
-spunk

Great poem, i can feel how you felt when you wrote it, Thx for commenting on my poem. Lovin the poems keep it up :)

Hey Gurla Thanx for commenting on my poem Couldn't Go 2; i love this poem u did cuz i know what is like to feel depress and try to end it all...well heres some more of kinda the same:
Couldn't Go (the 1st part to couldn't go 2)
Once Lost
Ask God For Wings
Dear God
Scared

En-joey ciao...

I really liked it, and I do the same I rather write how I feel instead of Hurting myself. 5/5

Kool poem, You realy felt the mood to write it. Keep going :D.

~*~ Tigger ~*~

I have moments where I feel the same. This poem of yours was very beautiful. Keep writing. Thanks for reading my poem "Holding On".