Comments : Betrayal and Murder

  • 19 years ago

    by Seth

    I really really like this poem, it reminds me of one of mine, a little.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    Frickin Amazing, That is definately beyond awesome...I love the twist at the end..Like a shor story..You really seemed to capture the girls discust for what she had done...FabOulus! 5!--Ash--

  • 19 years ago

    by Nookie

    "and i guess justice serves" i love that.

    great poem.