Pretty good. I liked it.

IF UR EVER SAD JUST REMEMBER:
1. i wil beat up whoever made u sad
2.i love u
3.if i was a lesbo i would rape u
4. i will make u laugh or try to lol
5.u can beat me in softball
6.i will let u beat me in basketball
-moomoo

I luved this poem I think Im in love with all your poem please never stop writting!!!!!!!!!!

yet another great peom, your a great writer and that was a great ending!