Comments : Within the Leaves

  • 19 years ago

    by Izzo

    ooo chilly! you are a master at words, knitting them together perfectly to create a truly macabre product.

  • 19 years ago

    by Debra

    creepy...i luv it

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Your writing definitely appeals to the mysteries people hope for, and depend their imaginations for. Your short tale has allowed us for a closer relationship with the potential of an uncommon intrigue. Since fantasy can be so much more rewarding than our days as common.

  • 19 years ago

    by paperdoll

    Ooh, this gave me goosebumps. Beautiful imagery, creates a sense of mystery and intrigue, untouched spells in an ancient forest.... these things always leave me poetic, you see.

    "Well done" doesnt quite seem to cover it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    there's something definately creepy to this, but i can;t place my finger on it. as any of your work is, this poem is delicately beautiful and the way the tone is set is pure genius.