Heh what is up with this death binge aken? I'm feeling a story poem coming on. Looks like you included some of the major themes in there, love hate good evil and all that good interesting stuff that makes up a Star Wars movie

I really like this. I love the symbolism that you use and just the way that you worded the whole peice. i love your format and text, it really adds a powerful effect. I found it dark and intrigiuing, well done