I am surprised that this poem is not receiving much more attention as it well deserves. It reflects some very heartfelt and beautiful thoughts that you have so meaningfully expressed. It is really beautiful.

I would encourage you to do a bit of work on the capitalization and punctuation here. Then this would come close to perfection, at least in my humble opinion.
--Lydia

I am having a good time on your page Rach, I like what you added to your name. You are protected on both sides. I admire that, and my guess this poem is a dedication to that symbol. I am proud of you. Take care

I love this poem. I think it deserves more attention though! Great work!

Rachelxx