very nice, usually i say a favorite line or stanza when i review, but the whole thing was awesome! 5/5

awsome poem, but very sad...there is always someone who cares...
remember that

GREAT POEM....EVEN THOUGH IT'S SAD! I KNOW HOW U FEEL I WAS LIKE THAT 2. JUST TRY NOT TO GO THROUGH WITH IT. IF THE REASON U WANT TO COMMIT SUICIDE IS CAUSED BY OTHER PPL THAN DON'T DO IT....CUZ THEN THEY'LL HAVE WON!

nice job i love that poem awesome work *5*

thankyou everyone