it's a good poem it should be in the explict poems, i wouldn't want so lil kid to read it. good thought

I love it!

great write! but I agree with T bob
5/5

For you bring the man in me I wish to be
I think this line might be missing a word, it would sound better if it read For you bring out the man in me, i wish to be. idk, just a thought, Other than that really great read, and maybe it should be in explict. 5/5

Pretty nice. I dont usually like this kind of a thing, but it didn't come across in an inappropriate manner, so it was actually kind of touching

You have great emotion when you write. keep it up. i like it.

Wow, it was awesome. was so loving and deep, emotional. it was great the flow was ok and the wording could have used a few extra bits in it (just my idea), but over all couldn't find anything else wrong with it. 5/5

This was sensual and not raunchy in any way with made it a joy to read. The emotions described were beautiful and loving. Well done *5/5*