wow... great poem. very descriptive. i loved it. hope ur okay. thanks for commenting on mine.
~cort~

Heyyy awesome poem! it was reallyyy good i liked it a lot!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

wow...that was amazing

I really like your metaphors that you use however this one didn't grab my attention like the other one but it was still good and i like the way you put your poetry together(Lol, hope that makes sense)

Is sad and fairly passionate, a good read.

I am not sure about the layout of this poem, by this I mean how many lines are in each verse. However, like with you other poems the overall effect is good.

Keep Writing
Nici

Amazing job! i love this! :)