such a strong poem. written fantastically, luved the ending. thank u for all the comments:)

keep it up! lu -x-x-x-x-

So many beautiful lines and phrases, as always. I loved the metaphorical comparisons used throughout the piece.

I really enjoyed:

Oh when your painted beauty
Drips away by the tears of melancholy

And the blood that absently runs through your veins
Spills from your rose-bud lips

Keep it up, you havent written in ages.

-paperdoll

thanks for your comments. i loved this poem. i gave u 5!