Great poem hun :) you doent matter about it being factual.
5/5
take care
x

thanku xxx

Thanku so much! Will check out your poems xxxxxx

i'll check out that poem :-), thanku so much for all ur comments xxxxx

excellent poem, dnt apologise cus it jst shows dat it coms frm within and isnt fake, wich makes it fantastic.

stay strong, lu -x-x-x-x-

thanku hun! xxx

This is really good...I like these lines too :
So many hours, thoughts left me behind
Couldn't cry, was too afraid to speak
Listened to same song over again
My mind grew tired as my body grew weak
It's all written so well..you have worded it just write..good job! Keep it up:o)

Thanku!! xxx