hey, i luv your poem but i just want to remind you although u think cutting is okai becoz u think "it isnt hurting anyone else" and its what is making you happy, well i tell u now it is hurting others, each cut u make kills someone else, so next time u think of taking that razor out.. just think of that person u are hurting.. sumtimes u gotta give up the thing that makes u happi.. so it doesnt hurt others.. becoz i tell u now u r hurting others.. more than u think with every cut!! they think u h8 em and dont want to be near them they think its all there fault.. n u no what if u do go far enough.. to end ur lyf.. they will blame thereself foreva.. n this may be many people.. n u no what.. it might even take their life too!! just think about others when u take out that razor.. that is what i do!

I am 30 now, but when I was 16 I thought I was NEVER going to be happy with anything, I didn't fit in here, or the guy I was dating (which I eventually married for a short time) was cheating on me, but I look back now, and I see all of the times I would have missed if I had succeeded in taking my life. Not to mention, it would have killed my father. And I have a beautiful little child now too. Please, NEVER do that to yourself. As for your brother, tell him to stay away from the drugs, they do make you feel good at first, but take it from me, I know.....it will kill you in the long run, or make you wish you were dead. Take care...please!

Wow very good great job definitely desrerved the 5... keep up the awesome work!

xox, BluERiBBoN

ps - thx loads for the comments on my poem

hey gr8 poem mate!
it really good!
keep on witting
it should help you to sort stuff out!
love u
jess
xxoxoxo

awesome poem you really capture your feelings well. thanks for commenting on my poem too!
~Ilene

thats really good, totally understand, feel that still, been there before, a few typing errors i think but its a gr8 write, thankyou for reading my 'consequences hurt so much...' poem, it was really appreciated,
hope you are doing better,
take care always,
ellie

Keira this is your brother, I hope this is not how you really feel, if so i think you need to talk to one of us. Def. not a good idea, read my poem Blue Skies whenever you feel that way

amazing poem, the same things run through my mind all the time. I am always here if u need someone to talk to, take care xoxox

that was a good poem. ive been there and so have lots of other ppl. i hope you got through it alrite. if not, get in touch with me if you wanna. but like i sadi, the poem was well written and captured the emotions well.

Hey this is awesome, and i know exactly how you feel, keep it up girl, and take care!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

dont you hate that feeling... its like you always want more no matter what... great work once again...