Aww... that's so good! But so sad. You are a very good writer. Is the name of this poem supposed to be "Untitled"? Just wondering.

~Ciao Lipton

i liked this one, it was very good. ciao~lee

ah haha... but its sooo old! its not even good..
yeah i suppose it could be untitled.. some of my poems just don't have titles. .. *shrug* lol.
whats even worse is that this is how i've actually been feeling lately.. i mean about life in general.
some of this "poem" actually happened... which makes me utterly sad. but oh well...
<3 bella

Good poem, you've really got a gift for words, even when they don't rhyme, your poems just flow! Keep writing! Peace