You can see the two, bodied fronts colliding...and this war you rage between them chases daggers to rain. A powerful poem.

You have such a way with words. I love how you are able to put something together and make it so lovely. The imagery in this poem was perfectly tied in and the symbolism was also used wisely. i love the concept ofg a storm, and that you chose such an overwhelming and beautiful subject to write about.

"So let our hearts now be watchful
lest we take our intemperate polarity
and make of it a perfect storm."

I love your words, they really create a dramatic effect. Good job

I hope I can remember these words when I need them....As always good poem