Kumar, Absolutely beautiful, what can I say. I enjoy your writing so much. Thanks for commenting on alot of my work, alot of people don't. If I enjoy one, I'm going to tell you. Beautiful job, once again. lol

awww so touching!

"Even if i try to hide my tears,they seem to come out,
even if i try to make them silent,they seem to shout,"

loved it! :-)

Oh-mi-gosh, that is such ana amazing poem, the language you used was so descrptive and touching. you really love this girl dont you? your poems are exellent, thanx 4 voting on mine

thats so sad and touching!!
omg u wrote it so excellently!!
take care!
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MeL

Excellent job. Sorry it's taken me so long to comment... anyway, take care and happy holidays!

Wow, truly amazing!! Love it
xXx

GREAT POEM FROM A GREAT POET

hey kumar...ive read your poems before and i never commented because i dont really have alot of time but this one made me want to. this is a really great poem...you took the words right out of my mouth, i feel this way with a guy that i wa in love with and still am though he doesnt seem to care very much....anyway thanks for the inspiration!!!!! much love, Renee

o yeah...you can check out some of my poems if you want and if you have time...thanks!! Renee