This is good stuff Ria.

Can i assume you were raised in a certain religion and no longer follow it? Vague question i know.

In the 6th Stanza...you might want to rework that section..maybe lose some syllables so it flows better...not that poetry has to be like an oil slick...but when you read it out as i do when i read poem..it trips over itself there..

Good luck with those demons.

hey riya this poem is AWSOME!!!!!! keep up the great work!! Always believe in love and trust in God!!
-Britt

The rhyme scheme isn't constant throughout the poem. I figured you would be anal about that since you pointed it out with me.

But overall, I like it.

I loved it. very emotional, excellent flow! 5/5

I loved it. very emotional, excellent flow! 5/5

I loved it. very emotional, excellent flow! 5/5