u need to change a couple of typos but otherwise a gd poem.

Great poem..I really liked this part,

the tears have now formed
a never ending stream
my eyes sting from this current
which drowns my every dream

You allow the reader to feel what you feel, you're very talented..mashalla..keep up the great work!!!

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

Awww. Hun this poem was so sad. I'm sorry about whoever treated you so badly. Seems to me that most guys are just plain old jerks these days. But anyhow, on a lighter note, your poem was soo amazing! It was written so well and I can say that I definitely can relate to each stanza. Great job! :)

Hey your stuff is good. You wrote a comment on mine I appreciate it. And it feels good to know that I don't feel these things alone.

I think everyone feels this way at least one time in their life, some more than others. I'm glad you wrote this cause i can relate to it. Great job! Thanks for commenting on mine by the way. :)