I thought that it was very well written. I liked your terminology throughout the poem, and I also enjoyed the assorted use of rhyme. Your inspiration really shone through, and I liked reading it.

this poem is awesome .......never reasd anything like this before..its unique....and really captivating ......

5/5

wow... i loved this poems alot. you have a talent! that was amazing!

Great poem i liked the words you used however i think if you start with a certain rythme scheme you shouldn't change it too often like you did, it reads a little weird however i thought it was good and still gave it 5....

Great thought behind it, you show mastry of skills through your presentation of this feeling, this idea.

Good.

That is in truth among the greatest poems I've read on this site...

the story is nothing less than excellent, your vocabulary is most impressing, the rhyming scheme is perfect, and so on and so on.

The very thought behind the poem is remarkable, and very well put into words. I'm off to read more of yours...

don't be to hard on me...English is not my mothers tongue..so...

but really great job...You have won an award with this one, right?

Simply and truly superb.

I don't really like poems like this. I'm not really sure how to explain what I mean by that though.

This poem has an ever apparent storyline, whcih further adds to the overall effect.

Keep Writing
Nici

This poem have caught my attention from the very far beginning.

"I’m the princess, I’m the jester, I’m the lie"

This was the perfect ending to a perfect poem.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

That poem held alot of charm and I agree with hussain it is captivating. I really enjoyed reading every line. The last line was the best and a great way to end the poem. I will be adding this one to my faves. 5/5