oh i understand it now its amazing i just didnt know that she was dead i understand and thats really great your so smart dont be so hard on your self it had an amazing twist.

Hey i thought the poem was great...you're very talented keep up the good work and remember if u dont think its good chances are a lot of other people will love it!

Caitlin

you really shouldnt be sorry, it kept me readin until the very end and then my jaw just dropped, totally to the floor lol. it really blew me away.....by the way my AIM is JazzyBb2, im me sometime, or ill try to im you tonight if i remember lol, but great job babe!
loved it!
jescelle

wow, that was really quite good as a whole poem, i personally didnt like the beginningish part of it but after that it got really really good, keep it up

very good 5/5

I didn't understand it at first. I thought that she was alive and he was dead and she was just imagining him being there..sry..i get it now. It was a great poem though! 5/5
xoxo
Megan