Comments : No Child Left Behind

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    One could imagine your expression while you wrote ths piece.
    The depth and compassion even for the world's trespasses you gave a sympathetic awareness.
    I truly enjoyed this poem "Miles. And I beg for more for I admit, you're one of my favorites ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    I'll definitely check her out! Thanks for the recommendation. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Great job. Excellent poem. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by erely

    Excellent writing....The depth of you is shining through

  • this is a really good poem but I had to read i a few times to undertsand all of the words!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin

    Bold effort Miles, i mean really. The way you meld philosophy and religious conotations whilst maintaining such a strong empathy for your fellow beings is something i've not seen done with so much skill since William Soutar [ a famous Scottish Poet you should check out].

    Seriously buddy-o, big respects...might want to watch your syllable count in some places though.

    : )