Great poem love...Very moving...luck to you...xxxx Do take care... <3

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

wow. that was unique, never read anything like it before. i agree with morgan- made your voice heard... only in a more poetic way. great piece. take care:)

Hmm...This is really a very different style for you...From what I can remember you've never written a poem wiht a central question.

I like it, its interesting. 5/5

That is an unusual poem. I enjoyed it because is very well written and speaks the truth. Sometimes the best help you can give someone is a harsh dose of reality.

Great poem and i really like the way it flows! And as they say "you've got to be cruel to be kind"
Execellent piece keep it up:)
*x*ShadowedPhoenix*x*

Jason (aka Rob) this is amazing. Keep it up! sorry it's like that though

Great poem. Shows the harsh realities of life and family, and was very well portrayed through-out the poem. Excellent. poem, Rob? ... Or Jason? :-)