An intriguing, insightful discussion delivered from an interesting viewpoint.

I tried...
And thank you!

Wow, you've done it again. Absolutly amazin, left me breathless. I love the way you word your lines, the intelligence in this piece is just beautiful (does that sound weird?) ok, well I absolutly love the speech in this poem and the observations and details of life summed up into absolutly mesmerizing words.
"A romance of blood…

Lust captures your susceptible hearts while your youth tends to blind you from Ra. And like oblivion maturity lays claim to become you venerable souls. Whence you come to understand the vulnerability of a frivolous imagination."
Wow, that stance left me absolutly speechless. Wonderful job