i loved this poem...it seemed that your words just matched what your thoughts were saying. The theme was close to home also...

i enjoyed the read and i want to thank you for it.

"Everything is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan poe

gr8 poem, kindda depressing that things like this really happen though, keep up the gd work

awesome poem... i can relate to this poem perfectly... keep up the good writting...
-sk8er101-

good poem thanx for adding me to your favorites hey you wanna email me ny email addy is yellow_bus92@hotmail.com

very good poem, i now remember why i added you to my favorites. your a gifted writer with a unique perspective on life.

there are a few spell mistakes....

Would if fly to the right things *i think if=it*

Theres is suppose to be there is, or There's....imagine me giving out grammer lessons who woulda thunk it.

But all in all an amazing poem.
Five/Five

wow... that wsa really good but also really sad, keep up the good work nd if u can cn u comment on mine? thanks