Excellent writting:o)
Keep it up!
Shanney

very nice :)

Thank you :-)

That was a beautifully written poem, Atahan. I loved the precise language you used to define emotions that are not easily described but often felt after the curtain has closed on a past relationship.

Your poem also contains a very appealing rhyme and rhythmic flow. Truthfully, I come across very few poems of this caliber. This is one that I will surely re-read more than once.

Thank you for taking your time to write this comment. I'm glad you liked it, it means alot to me since I usally dont write poems about this topic.

cheers

Love the rhyme scheme, love the words, very strong, pure and different..in a good way! keep it up!