Good poem!! i liked it a lot great work!!

Seriously love it. So vivid and alive you make the words dance in my head and show me a world of secrets and darkness. You portray everything so exactly. Nothing could begin to explain how good this poetry is. It put a world in my lead. I love it. Do it again!!! lol great work!

That was great, I like that creepy like me. Kepp on writing.

Jennifer:) aka Craze

Wow. Totally awesome. I loved it.

This is a great poem. it flows well and i think that you have a great talent foe writing so keep the good work up and i would like to see more from you...
-C.P.-