Comments : Shard of Bliss, Shard of My Broken Dreams

  • 19 years ago

    by Lipton

    Wow! I absolutely love your language in this! Very powerful! Great job!

    ~Ciao Lipton

  • 19 years ago

    by [Neon/] ©

    haha.. thank you much.

  • 19 years ago

    by It Itty

    Awesome! Wow, I don't think I could ever even begin to decribe something like you did. Beautiful job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Nobrainy_duh

    Good poem! Just wondering, what inspired this? I really hope you feel better, if you ever want to talk, you know who I am, I'm in the Media Center first period!

  • 19 years ago

    by Cassandra

    wow keep up the good work