Comments : The Kiss I So Desire

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    that was a great piece... glad to hear from you again. i liked the descriptions and use of words. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I thought this was lovley. I loved the imagery and dramatic symbols. It was darkly romantic, and I especially admired the lines,
    "A long lost feeling I miss
    A fragment of what thought to me a midnight kiss."
    I thought those were really beautiful. Well done