Kay, you are probably like "Why the hell is this in fantasy?" well simply bacause of Tarot cards. that is fantasy...like they are real but they like are all not true *sorry to anyone who plays tarot!* I just like writing about this type of stuff. I also realize that i slacked off at the end but i had to go to work. so i just wrote an ending. Enjoy tho!

Interesting story.... (forgot to end the quote at the end)... This kinda reminds me of that witch movie... I forgot it's name... I want to say charmed... But that's the T.V. show.... I think if her brother dies Ana will not want to live... This is a very good story... Keep it going... Though i have to say something about the vodoo lady... The way she talked was slightly weird.... Like i never heard an old person say "fret" before.... She sounds at points old.. wise... and scary... but other times i was like "ehhh" hehe... :-p ... Well okay... This is a long enough comment... Keep on writing and Take Care
Angel

u seriously have not heard an old person say fret? you are weird!