Hey...I really like this! Who the crap would give it a four...fools. They never read the piece twice.

I really like the way how you simplify the walk of life, as simply 'sleep' walking. Poetry is the best way to vent, and lament.

Good job! 5/5

wow, awesome poem, the first stanza especially; it's soo descriptive, great work!!!! =) thanks for reviewing
-Erica