Very sweet!! You really did a good job!! Keep it up and take
Happy Holidays

this is one cool poem!!! exactly how i feel with my boyfriend i just cant put it down in to words. Well done!!! :-) xxxx

this poem is awesome. it describes the kind of thing a boyfriend would say to his friend.

It reminds me of a movie. I think its okay but its too normal. I like special poems ones you can feel burning deep inside. But this poem seems boring to me.