Comments : Heartbreak

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Nice dedication...but i guess nothing can comfort a broken heart...not even time....nice poem....take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by anagha

    sweety its great keep it up dudette

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadFlame

    *2 thumbs up*

    u write great poems!! ^__^

  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    yeah i know the feeling too...sure sucks doesnt it? nice dedication!

    "A gush of cold air gives me a start;
    and tears held back fall freely tearing me apart,"
    these are my fabourite lines in ure poem! :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Your rythem flares the emotion here and becomes a worthy tribute to beauty, even when it's about regret.
    A good read.