Comments : Loving a married guy

  • 19 years ago

    by Thumbelina04

    jst how i want tht lad 2 see things,im sure well both find some1 well lets hope!! x

  • Love the title lol; saw it and it really got me interested
    I think you could write more though in the poem, make the fact you love a married guy more of a bigger deal. Words in a poem are no good without feeling behind them. Though I like the poem.
    The last two lines where nice lol