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awesome great well written great job

wow.. very good. im glad it ended happily. 5/5

Awesome poem!! I loved it!! 5/5

I liked this poem but I would have preffered it to have a SPLAT ending lol...

Wow. that was amazing. you seemed to beable to paint the picture perfectly have any tips?

omg! this poem was so amazing it brought tears to my eyes serisouly..i really did like it you are going into my favorites now keep up the great job...

ttyl
Maddy

This was a really good poem. Ihni how many people go thru this each day. but writing about it, and knowing some are saved is a great relief. Keep up the GrEaT work.

Love Alwayz,
Katie Schettler