This poem is really cool.
Gurdy x

This poem is Really Good!!!!!!!

I loved it. truly amazing. Keep up the good work.

This is really awesome work..I luv the topic^_^ and the words are just written so well and are so fluent..I could just read it over and over again and it would never get old..This is great..I luved it..Keep on writting okay
Shanney

Bold effort.

I can't add anything to this, which is unsual, brilliant flow, nothing too cliche about it...top ending.

Like Anne Rice huh? Have you ever roleplayed a vampire before? I was Louis for about 6 months in this amazing story...i'm thinking of starting up something like that in here. WOuld you be interested?

Beautifully graphic; I loved it. A truly remarkable piece about the living undead. I admire this poem in all different aspects. It's original- and I'm a sucker for vampire poems.
Well done!

oo I like it very dark..I like how you talk about the vampire talking to you. Very cool. <3333