what are you talking about!!!!??? this doesnt suck! its wonderful.

i love how you make a wish at the end to close it. and this part:
"If Little Girls only Knew,
The True Portraits of Life,
Perhaps in Succession,
There Wouldn't Be Strife."

is like another wish. its beautiful. i dont know how you could think it sucked!

Aww! This poem was sooo sad.. yet SO excellent! I must agree with Jen, your poem(s) do not suck! They're always so well written and coming straight from your heart - which makes any poem great! You have a gift, yes, that's for sure! =)

Brilliant...Just brilliant!! It does NOT suck!! Oh trust me....escpeacially not to a girl who has wished she had a daddy her whole life...Excellent--I am speechless....Keep it up and take care...Happy Holiays

i dont know man. i liked it. the off capitalization and grammar, along with your usual odd style of writing made for a good read. the last stanza seemed a little out of place, but not necisarrily in a bad way.