The words were powerful, the links were strong, but i didnt understand it... There was no method to it, and it just didnt make sense. What was it about? A murder or a suicide? A posession maybe? Good work though

I liked it, powerful words and imagery used and the violence was well put to create a dark effect, god job,

(p.s. person above, poems dont always have to "make sense" not all poems tell stories, though this one seems to, some poems are completly miscellaneous and have no story or event behind them. sometimes its just about getting emotions out onto paper.)