If your father really said that, then he isn't much of a father is he? Being a father is more than just a title, you have to earn the right to be called a dad, it isn't just something you are when you have a child. Anyway, absouletly wonderful poem... keep writing and i'll keep reading.

Hey, thanks for the comment. I people just don't like my work and they rate it acordingly, either that or they just want to be pricks, who knows... do you have AIM? if so send me an email and let me know, or you can leave it in a comment if you don't mind everyone seeing it.