acurate and deep image of what love is like..i really liked how you put everything into context. I enjoyed the poem and it was one of my favorites.

I loved it.

Five/Five

P.S. thank you for your comment anything that goes on that poem is really appreciated and i will write back to everyone who comments on my poem. i know not all gals are like her...just the ones that i seem to meet, maybe it is something a matter with me...maybe i am too nice or something....but i don't like to hurt the ones i love.

really good. The rhyme is excellent. Keep it up.

Its a 5/5