Beautiful rhyming poem. Simple, yet meaningful. Your style reminds me of one of my friends' :) it's well written.

I liked the words you used it flowed really well, and had a really strong message...great poem definately worth a read 1 million times...
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Scoobs

awesome poem, i love the first stanza, and the second... and the third, right... excellent poem! 5/5

Short but full of meaning...awesome.. very well done....keep it up