Comments : It's Wrong

  • 19 years ago

    by Thumbelina04

    jst how am feeling, cos i cant like him cos of my cousin, dunt stop us though i dont think lol, well done agen babe! x

  • It’s a bit of a muddle to be honest, I’ve read some of your latest poems and they where brilliant but you are lacking in something in your old ones. There just words put together with no feeling. It wasn’t bad, but I know you can do so much better.