i like the line if somethings wrong ill get over it, makes it seem like u cud get over anything, certainly made me feel better anyway well done darl x

Its inspiring its showing strength not weakness
Don’t like the I’m a tit bit though
I think if maybe you write the words like because instead of cuz more people may read them, i'd like to just say u instead of you but i find people get annoyed at people who are litterate, i know it's easier but just try it, see if more people read your poems