Oh Sherry, this was so beautiful, I often forget about the important things in L.I.F.E. Thanx for writng this, it was magnificent! Love, Tim

Sherry,

You've described what truly life is about...we tend to forget the process because we are caught up with other things...we never sit and try to understand...I love how you layed this out...very beautiful write...Good Job. Ten.
libby

Excellent

Sherry

This was really brilliantly written my friend your choice of words was perfect and your flow amazing

I really enjoyed reading this poem thank you kindly for sharing it!

Wow just amazing. x

woooo Nicely done hun!! Loved it!

A great poem. It really got me thinking, we often lose touch with whats really important. I loved it.
Keep up the great work.

~Kelly

Well it may not have been a sterotypical poem but i really liked it mostly because it's an honest outlook and because i agree:) some places the flow was a bit "stuck" (sorry can't like of a better word) but it was a really amazing "poem" and i really enjoyed it.

WOW... I love the way you are looking at it, approaching the way of writing and the subject.. awesome!! -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Wow, awsome, I would like to know where that one came from.......any ways, I'm about to type a new poem, hopefully you'll read it.........

Wow... Another amazing piece of work! Deep and meaningful that all should take to heart. Keep up the great work! Your talent should be an inspiration to a lot of people. 5/5

Oh the start was excellent. your relating to the titantic was excellent. another 5 from me.

5/5 David

Excellent One!5/5 for you!