Now this one is truly amazing!!!! I especially loved the lines:

I am not this person
That this reflection claims

And I love the way it had a happy ending. Not so depressing and droll..I loved every bit of it!!

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

hey kay this is a great poem i loved it sometimes i can feel that way too you should read some more of mine i have some in the "dark" section lol but i loved this poem i think i might read some more of them always-nat

Hey girl! thanks for commenting my poem! you're a great writer too keep up the good work!! cindy

This is a really good poem, great use of words and rhythm. i love the way you express your emotion and how the poem flows! good job.