This poem is for a good friend of mines by the name of Deloren J. Young.... I will miss you

this poem is for a good friend of mines by the name of DeLoren J. Young. You will always be loved and missed

good poem i would give it a 4. Some errors I found: But many silent tears is shed
When other are sleep

it should be or would sound better if it was but many silent tears are shed
when others are asleep.

But pretty good. :)